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.:This Kiss:.

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"Cinderella said to Snow White
"How does love get so off course, oh
All I wanted was a white knight
With a good heart, soft touch, fast horse
Ride me off into the sunset
Baby I'm forever yours"

It's the way you love me
It's a feeling like this
It's centripetal motion
It's perpetual bliss
It's that pivotal moment
It's, ah unthinkable
This kiss, this kiss, unsinkable
This kiss, this kiss"

This Kiss - Faith Hill

here it is the long awaited finished version of the lineart wip i submitted earlier, i ended up not doing lineart for the background because it proved too difficult for me OTL

anyway, the characters are two of my absolute faves of my OCs right after Yuuki and Shou of course <3

Kain and Catherine. two characters that could care less for their social class. Kain the son of the late Duke, Catherine the daughter of a widowed (and re-married) Viscountess. Promised to each other by their parents, loved by each other unconditionally. While they may not care for social standing others do and dont take lightly to Catherine marrying up 7 classes, but they'll manage.

Catherine is actually standing on her tip-toes but because her dress is missing its rhino's ass (the giant cage that fits under the dress to carry the back end) her dress drags the floor. she is quite literally a foot shorter than Kain.

just a little snip bit of their first, and second kiss. this pic takes place in between the two.

Kain: "Catherine, may I steal a kiss from you?"
Catherine: *she giggles thinking you are too nice for your own good* "you may"

Improvement club: any help with anatomy / background would be great :3 id love to see what i need to improve with this
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

well what can i say? its really lovely. stunning gorgeous. i could've never pulled off such a piece. i mean the anatomy seems downright perfect the characters. i am rather speechless <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>.
ilove the contrast of the ocean to her dress. quite a color scheme actually.

The folds is just lovely btw.

But i have some things that you could improve but its just a suggestion.

1. i guess it would've been perfect if you toned the color a but? it rather seemed a bit flat? i recommend this tutorial [link] its really informative
2. i think you could've improved the romantic atmosphere (if thats what you are aiming for) by making some effects i guess? like sparkles?

other than that ur art is a total GORG. stunning lovely. i could just print it and hang it on my wall.